Vixen's Christmas Adventure

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lol, this is another story, i'll try and write it better than my others :)

Vixen chewed on her hay, she was in a small cage in a pet shop. She had only been seperated from her mum a few days ago and she still missed her and her siblings. They used to chase each other and play fight, but she was the only sow in the litter and had to be seperated from her brothers. The pet shop was very busy today, people were buying pets for their children, Vixen wanted to be bought so she could go to a nice home where she could play again, she had heard her mother talk of such places, with owners who loved their pets, bought them large cages and lots of toys, Vixen hoped her new home, if she ever got one, would be like that.
She finished her hay and walked over to the front of her cage, there were children looking at hamsters, chinchillas and fluffy rabbits, but no one noticed Vixen! She decided she'd only get a home if she got their attention, she let out a loud wheek, then a young girl, about the age of three ran over to Vixen's cage. Vixen was excited to see her, she seemed like a nice human, she put her fingers into Vixen's cage and Vixen licked them, the little girl giggled and smiled. Then the girl ran over to her mum and asked if she could have Vixen, her mum smiled and said yes, then they talked to the pet shop owner, her went into the back and got a cardboard box, he stabbed some holes in it with his pen and put a handful of bedding in, then he opened Vixen's cage, she practicaly leapt into his hands and then into the box, she was going to her new home!
 
That's great Beth, great punctuation too! O0


So what happens next? ;D
 
thanks
lol I was writing some, but I got distracted by a link on how to make cozies ;D

The lid of the box was closed and Vixen was plunged into darkness, the only light was shining through the small holes the pet shop owner had made, she stuck he nose out of the box, she could still smell the pet shop, then suddenly the box began to move and the smell of the pet shop had gone, all she could smell now was fresh air. She pulled her nose out the hole and looked out of it, she could see hundreds of people and hear hundreds of people, she started to get quite nervous and she hid under the pile of bedding and waited. The box stopped moving but she could hear a strange noise, it sounded like an engine, this must be the same thing she came to the pet shop in! She could remember the gentle humming it made as her and her brothers went off to start their new lives away from their mum, it had sent them all to sleep, and when she woke up her brothers had gone and she was alone in a cage. This time there wasn't a gentle humming it was a bumpy ride and the enginge was louder than before, Vixen snuggled into the bedding and closed her eyes, trying to block out all the noise.
 
When the journey was over, Vixen started to relax again, she wanted to see what her new home was like! She was taken inside the house. She was lifted out her box and put into a large cage, it had clean shavings on the floor, a pile of hay in the corner and a bowl of pellets, she popcorned and started wheeking with joy, the little girl offered her some carrot and Vixen happily ate it, she purred as she chewed it, the carrot juice made her lips go orange and the little girl laughed even harder. Vixen liked her new owner and she loved her new home, she had always dreamt it to be this way.
The next day, the little girl and her mum brought a large box into the room that Vixen was in, Vixen watched as they un-packed a big green tree?!? Vixen thought it looked tasty and waited for them to put it in her cage for her to eat, but instead they put it on a table in the corner of the room and started putting things on it, they put shiny balls, and little flashing lights, then they finished it off with draping what looked like shiny hay over it! She watched with her head on one side as the little girl's mum put things udner the tree, they were wrapped in coloured paper, Vixen looked at the paper in the bottom of her cage, it was white with lots of black writing on it, it wasn't even half as pretty as that paper, she wheeked in protest!
 
It was eveing time and the humans were all sitting on the sofa talking, Vixen chewed her cage bars, she wanted to be out there with them! The little girl's mum picked up Vixen and put her on her lap, she tickled Vixen behind her ears and Vixen began to purr, her eyes slowly started closing as she dozed off. She was awoken an hour later when the mum put her back in the cage, the little girl came over to Vixen and said goodnight, she watched as the little girl's mum took her up-stairs. Vixen noticed her cage door wasn't shut properly, she leant against it and it fell open, Vixen tumbled out her cage and landed on the floor, she looked around, the lights on the big tree were flashing and their colours danced on the walls around the room. She suddenly smelt something, she stuck her nose in the air, she was sure she could smell carrot! She went to where she could smell it, it was on the table next to the tree, she was determined to get the tasty treat! She jumped onto the sofa and then leapt onto the table, next to the carrot was some human food and white liquid in a glass, Vixen started to eat when suddenly a strange man walked into the room, he was wearing red clothes and a red hat he also had a long white beard, Vixen stepped back in surprise, who was this man?
 
The man walked over to Vixen, she wasn't sure what to do, she hadn't seen him before, but for soem reason she wasn't scared, she sat and looked at him, the man held out his fingers for Vixen to sniff, she slowly walked over to them and sniffed them, then the man tickled Vixen's ears, she purred as she always did, then he picked her up, she looked at his face, he looked like a nice human, but he didn't seem human. He put her back on the table then took some more things wrapped in brightly coloured paper out of a bag and put them under the tree, one had Vixen's name on?!? She wheeked at the man and he winked at her, then he picked her up and clicked his fingers, they were no longer in the house, they were on top of it! They were in a large red thing, it was like the car she had coem home in but it didn't have a noisy engine or even wheels! At the front there were some brown animals with antlers, they were attached to the red thing and there was a long pair of reins that the man held, he tugged on the reins and the deer sprang into action, they ran to the edge of the roof, Vixen closed her eyes and wheeked in terror, what was he doing! When she opened her eyes, she saw they were flying across the village, she looked down and saw the roof tops, as they soared through the air she got this amazing feeling inside her, she wheeked with happines and began to purr.
 
I reckon you should get yourself a publisher! These stories would be great for children, and a great way of educating about the proper care of piggies too. I'd buy them!
 
lol since I was 10 I wanted my stories published but i didn't think they were good enough- 4 years on and I still think the same ;D
 
lol I better finish this one first ;D

She woke up the next morning, she was back in her cage she began to wonder if it had all been a dream, but the she saw the carrot the man, who she now knew as Santa, had given her. It was still dark outside so it must of been very early, Vixen knew the humans wouldn't be awake for a few more hours, but then she noticed they were all down stairs pulling the pretty paper off the packages that were under the tree, she could sense excitement in the air, so she joined in and began to skip about her cage and wheek loudly. After the humans had opened their presents they gave Vixen hers, she ripped at the paper, and inside was a new food dish and some chew sticks.
Vixen had been playing with her chew sticks for a while now, she loved tossing them around her cage suddenly she smelt vegetables, she walked over to the edge of her cage and sniffed, the humans were having dinner! Vixen wiated around the edge of her cage watching them, hoping that she would have some of the vegetable peelings, and she did! They gave her some chopped cabbage and a small piece of carrot, she liked today, she hoped it would always be this way.
 
6 months had passed and much to Vixen's dissapoinment, the joy hadn't lasted, her owner no longer played with her or fed her tasty vegetables, they just gave her soem dusty mix once every two days, Vixen didn't know what had gone wrong, her owner used to love her and play with her every day, and her mum used to cuddle her, but now they just ignored her. She sat in the corner of her cage, wheeking softley she heard soemone walk into the room, she hopped up and ran over to them, but they just picked her up and put her in a box like when they first got her, but this didn't have any bedding in or holes, they put the box in the back of their car and started up the noisy engine.
 
Oh no, they happy story got sad. :'(

I hope they take poor Vixen somewhere nice.
 
lol, i was having lunch! :D

The car stopped suddenly and Vixen felt the box being lifted up, she wheeked nervously as teh box was carried by what smelt like the mum, the box was put down, a few minutes later Vixen heard the car drive off. She waited for a while but she then decided they weren't coming back. She tried to climb out the box but it was too high, she heard some thunder in the distance and it started to rain.
The storm raged on for hours and the rain had made the box collapse, Vixen was able to climb out of it, she looked around and saw that she was near a forest, she went under the trees out of the rain and looked for somewhere to shelter until the storm was over.
 
lol yeah I am only 14 :)
I'm abit stuck now lol, I know the ending, but I'm not sure how to get there :-\
 
Vixen walked through the forest, avoiding the thick mud and puddles which riddled the forest floor. She looked around, despratley seeking shelter, then she spotted a rabbit hole, she walked over to it and looked inside, she couldn't see any rabbits, so she went inside. The tunnel led into an underground chamber that was lined with dried grass, Vixen snuggled into the dried grass and closed her eyes, she wanted to sleep but she kept thinking of her owners and what they had done, she drifted off into a peaceful sleep.
 
Poor Vixen! I can't belive they dumped her! I really thought she'd found a happy forever home!
 
AWWW vixen, ive got a lump in my throat....need to know the ending pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee ;)
 
Suddenly Vixen heard a loud thumping, she turned to see a large brown rabbit looking at her, she jumped to her feet and stepped back, the rabbit's long whiskers tickled Vixen's nose as the rabbit sniffed her, they both looked into each other's eyes for a moment, and then all the tension was gone, they both relaxed as if they had been friends for ages, Vixen found out that the rabbit was called Ra, her and Ra settled next to each other and Ra started grooming Vixen, Ra knew that Vixen needed help.
Later in the evening Ra and the other rabbits went out to find food, Vixen decided to stay near the burrow and graze on the grass and plantain, she had been eating for a while when she heard something behind her, she turned to see a larger rabbit, it didn't seem as friendly as Ra, it hesitated for a while then jumped on Vixen, he bit her and tried to kick her, Vixen lay on the floor helpless when suddenly Ra came bounding over and dived into the bigger rabbit, knocking him off Vixen, they grabbed each other's throats and rolled around in the dirt screeching, Ra and the other rabbit looked so similiar, it was difficult to tell the differance between the two as they fought. One of the rabbits fell life less and the other lay on it's side panting, Vixen prepared for the worst.
 
Vixen slowly walked over to the two rabbits, she realised that Ra had won the fight, his face was scratched and his ears were torn but he had survived! Vixen was lucky Ra had come, otherwise the bigger rabbit could have killed her with one kick! The other rabbits approached the two friends, they seemed distressed, Ra told her that the bigger rabbit was infact the cheif rabbit. The other rabbits chased after Ra and Vixen, banishing them from their warren. Ra and Vixen were alone. Ra spent all night looking for a place where he could dig a burrow for them both when he found some soft soil near an old tree, he began to dig but as it got darker he found it harder to see, so they slept in the small shelter Ra had managed to dig, and Ra would finish digging it the next day.
 
The next day did come, quicker than Vixen expected and Ra had finished digging the burrow, it was a new, secure place they could live in forever. But that was two months ago.
It had been about 8 months scince Vixen was bought from the pet shop, and in those 8 months so much had happened! She could still remember her first christmas, how she had met Santa and how he had given her a ride in his magic sleigh. She wanted to tell Ra, but they couldn't talk well to each other as they were both differant species, and he probably wouldn't know what christmas was anyway. One day she saw a rabbit sitting near the entrance of the burrow, at first she thought it was Ra but then realised it was a doe! She watched from a safe distance as Ra brought the doe some grass, like he did for Vixen every night. Vixen had feared this but she knew it was going to happen, Ra had found a mate, and he probably wouldn't want her hanging round the burrow anymore, he'd soon have his own family to look after, heavy hearted, Vixen turned and walked away from the two rabbits and away from the burrow.
 
:'( Oh no, not again. poor Vixen.

I have to go to work now, and I don't want to go in case I miss anything. :'(
 
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